Online stories, Nov. 23, critique

Best things:

         Nick did a nice job on the Student Congress walk around campus to look for potential safety hazards. He included good description and color and an abundance of quotes from multiple sources.

Audrey wrote an interesting and balanced piece on the Fort Worth Symphony strike that affects UTA Music Department professors.

Isabel wrote an entertaining tale about her decision to return to being a vegetarian. She comically quoted friends and family members’ reactions:

“Why?!” —Mom

“You’re so annoying.” — Lovely roommate

“How did that happen?” — Friend

“You’re still doing that?” — Dad

Needs improvement:

The lede on the UTA Thanksgiving dinner with Dr. K was at the end of the story: an anecdote from the president about how his wife invited him home for Thanksgiving in college. And the rest is history.

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